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My view on Video Games
In our daily life, more and more children are losted in the Video Games nowadays.
As far as I'm concerned, Losting in the Video Games make a differerce on the child body and philosephy. It may cause the child not concentrating on the schoolwork and could not commuinite with the peers corretly. So, we should take some measure on it. Firstly, you should find your hobby in your life. That will make you more fullfilling. Secondly, set an goal in your life. when you achieved it, you will felt more delighted. Thirdly, we ought to limited our Video Games time, such as one hour a day. So, losting in the Video Games is bad for our health.We should prevent it.

[460649]My View on Video Games
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
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vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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