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What is Real Beauty?
In the everybody lify,the beauty is a very important word.Beacase,everyone would speak the word.But,everyone have differens undersdant.Somepeople shuold the face is beauty that is important.But somepeople disagree.They shuold the hart is beauty that is important.
AS fae as I'm concernd the hart is beauty that is important. First, If you have a very beautful fave,but you won't have do good things . You aren't a good man. Then,If you fat,black,notall and don't have beautful face.But, you do everything can do best. I think so, everybody will say you are a good man.Last,Have a good hare is important, Beacase,the face can change,the hart can't.
So,what is real beauty? I think the hart beauty than the face beauty.On the one hard,the hart is important than the face. On the other hard,good man is better than bad man.

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 You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "What is Real Beauty". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 很多人认为外表美重要;
2. 有人说心灵美重要;
3. 你的看法。
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beauty of appearance,different attitudes to beauty, inner beauty, morality, Lei Feng , example, model of beauty, spirit, the beauty lying in one's heart , embodied in actions and deeds
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