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My View On Video Games
Nowadays, video games become more and more pupular. However most children are addicted to the video games. On the one hands, They can play games even don't eat and sleep with a long time, which is halmful to their bodies. On the other hands, some violent games will lead to children fright with others, which makes thier psychology unhealth and make their heart out of the study.
As far as I am concerned, first, parents and teachers should be responsible to prrvent children from playing video games more. Second, chldren ought to learn self-control on video games. Last but not least, chldren who addicted to video games can move their attention on reading book or doing sports, and I believe they will find video games is not the only in their life.

[460649]My View on Video Games
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
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vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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