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Nowaday many people play their phone when they cross the stress. I think it's too danger for them.
when they put their mine in the phone, they wil not take care of the cars. As we all know, there are many cars in the stress when people after the work. Becsause of this, there are many accicends in the stress. In other hands, it will cause people walk to the wrong road. If the people want to go home, but he put his mine in the phone, he will go to another road. Third,i
think it wll cause people miss the bus. If the people is playing the phone, he will not know whether the bus will come, so he would miss it . Forth,i think it's also bad for eyes .
I think there are many ways to sovle the problem. First, we should find some volunteers to stop people play phone in the stress. Second, we can make some laws about it to sould the problem. Third, we can tell people how danger it is when they play phone in the stress on TV show .
I believe if we do that we can sovle the problem soon.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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