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As we all know,there is the common action that we often do,crossing the street while playing with the phone.It is no doubt that it will make many bad infiuences .
First of all,it sure will be bad for our eyes,too close to see things and moving so unstable.Then playing the phone will not let you full of concentrate on walking,your senserty of feeling danger will decrease,your life facing chanllenge.Last but not lest,the action distory the traffic rules , making many lifes lossing.
It is the badly things.well,it must take some actions to advoid those painful things.In my opinion,we can make some advertisements to impove the mind of us people.And then ,asking the school to make some disscus to talking about the influence of the bad habit.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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