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My View on Video Games
So many childs are attractive in video games , which is seriourly bad for their growth.
For one thing , it makes a bad influence for their body ; they use the whole time to playing games without going to sports and even forget to eat something beacuse they maybe can not feel any sence of hungry in order to the promotion of the games. Also , their eyes will be hurted by the light of computer as their longtime stay front the computer. As well as , they become more and more lazy in study even in life. For another thing and it is more important dnd essencial for the childs'future. Not only the video games have a trouble influence in childs' physical body , but also in inside of them. there is an untrue environments in the games , but we all should be seriously faced is the true life we can touch. It is a disadvantages for the growth of them to create their own future.
Our parents should aviod the bad thing occurring , and parents should be knew that they are very important for helping their childs to escap the dilenma of the video games. As far as i am concerned , parents should educate their childs about the advantages and the disadvantages of computer , and teach them how to use computer in a available way.

[460649]My View on Video Games
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
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vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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