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With the development of tech,there are lots of cellphone everywhere.People enjoy the benefit from cellphone,in the cellphone there are interesting games,excllent movies,online books,you can also communicate with your friends or parents,so they play the phone as possible as they can all the day,even crossing the street.But as far as I am concerned ,the hehavior is very dangerous that it should be forbidden.
If a person cross the street while play the phone,you will be careless for surrounding,you will ignore what happen around you,because you pay all your attention to the phone screen,but it can influence the traffic obviouely even course the traffic jam.Besides,if the driver didn't stop the car in time when you cross the street ,you will get injured badly even losing your life.It sounds unbelieve,but it is possible to happen.
Some measures should be taken to solve this problem,people should control themselves not to play the phone for a long time,and police on the street need to forbid the people who want to cross the street while playing with the phone.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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