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Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
Now more and more people tend to play their phome when crossing the street.
It's very dangerous to do this.Because the traffic is so heavy that people who plays phone sometimes will cause traffic jam.Even worse,it will lead to traffic accident.On the other hand,with more people act like this,the less traffic rules are observed.Then,people may get familliar to break traffic rules.It really do harm to the safety in city.
In my opinion,we should take action as soon as possible.First the gorvernment can arouse people not to play with the phone while crossing the street.If someone do this and cause traffic accident,he should pay a part of the duty.The newspaper can also report more news about the accident caused by using phone or the risk of crossing the street uncarefully.
I hope our country will become safer to citizens,and all of us can live here happily.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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