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What is Real Beauty
All of peolpe are willing to be praised as "You are so beautiful !" ,but what is real beauty?
Some people thing beauty is having a nice appearance.They believe that a nice appearance can support them a easy way to make more friends and got more chances in their carrer. More importantly,a nice appearance also give them more confidence to meet with all of the challenges and difficulties in the future.
The other people believe that meal beauty is more important than appearance beauty.The real beautiful person is that who is warm-booded,willing to help other,respected parents and teachers ,get along well with her friend and etc.If a nice appearance person is a rude ,selfish person that he is no concerned to be a beautiful person.
As far as I'm concerned ,I'm prefer to the last opinion. We can no choose a nice appearance but we can have a good-heart to become a real beautiful people.As long as all of us have a good do so ,our world willl be more beautiful.

[460912]What is Real Beauty?
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 You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "What is Real Beauty". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 很多人认为外表美重要;
2. 有人说心灵美重要;
3. 你的看法。
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beauty of appearance,different attitudes to beauty, inner beauty, morality, Lei Feng , example, model of beauty, spirit, the beauty lying in one's heart , embodied in actions and deeds
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