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My view on video games
With the development of the society,many video games appear everywhere,the vedio games become the new way for the chlidren to enjoy themselves.The video games can make the children relax themselves and they can care themselves without parents.However,every coin has two sides,without the parents,lots of children will crazy in playing the video games. Because of the video games,many chlidren maybe play it all days and nights,they also do not talk with their parents and finish their homework,so that it is bad for the body and pshosophy of the chlidren.
In order to solve this problem,first of all,the parents of chlidren must take care of the children,they have to take charge of the time which the children play the video games,and they must require the children play the video games after finish their homework.Futhermore, the school which the children study in must educate that the disadvantage of playing the video games,let the children know the important of their study,as well as make them get rid of playing video games crazily.Last but not least,the children must listen to their parents and teachers and obey the rules.

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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
范文
vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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