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What is Real Beauty
As well-konwn , on the one hand, many people tends to believe that having a great looking is important . Because that makes us confident . In fact , a number of university's students would choose to go to the hosipital to change their face . So they could get a better job after graduation.
On the other hand, some people prefer to believe that the beauty of our heart is more important . Because that's what a secioty needs. If we all got a beauty face but without good qualities , that would get our life in a big trouble . For example, there will be more criminals. So we really needs beauty of heart .
As far as i am concerned , the beauty of heart is real beauty. It's more important than our looking . That will make us feeling better and it will push our secioty go ahead.

[460912]What is Real Beauty?
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 You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "What is Real Beauty". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 很多人认为外表美重要;
2. 有人说心灵美重要;
3. 你的看法。
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beauty of appearance,different attitudes to beauty, inner beauty, morality, Lei Feng , example, model of beauty, spirit, the beauty lying in one's heart , embodied in actions and deeds
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