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As far as i know , everyone have the different view on beauty . one who have a good job
and a lots of money may be say beauty , or someone have a wonderful husband and children may be say beauty too . In my opinion , both a sense of " mastery " and a sense of "pleasure " are necessary to everyone that's ture beauty . when you choose a good career , but you can't expect to have a closer relationships or a happy family life, that's can't be a beauty life. on the other side , when you have a lots of money but your mother has just died . you might be very good about youself and in control of your work life,but the pleasure side could be damaged for a time , that's also can't be a beauty life too. so , both a "mastery" life and a "pleasure" life you are need ! it's real beauty .

[460560]My View on Beauty
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on  Beauty". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:  
1. 大家对美有不同的看法;
2. 你对美的定义;
3. 举例说明。
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different attitudes to beauty, beautiful appearance, inner beauty, outward beauty, morality, Lei Feng , example, model of beauty, spirit
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