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[作文号:3198014] Revise the second writing with no less than 150 words(2025-03-07)

要求：Homework for English writing1.请对比下列两篇四级作文，分析低分作文和高分作文有哪些差异并并思考如何写一篇高分作文。四级作文真题题目：2014年6月英语四级写作真题题目“Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown/your campus/China, what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?”假设你的一位外国朋友来参观你的家乡，你最想带他/她去看哪个地方？低分作文示例及分析作文内容：I would like to take my foreign friend to visit the park in my hometown. It's a big park with many trees and flowers. We can walk there and enjoy the beautiful scenery. I think he will like it because it's very nice. 高分作文示例及分析作文内容：If I had the opportunity to show my foreign friend around my hometown, I would undoubtedly choose to take him to the ancient town situated at the heart of our region. This charming town, with its cobblestone streets and timber-framed houses, exudes a unique historical atmosphere that is both enchanting and educational.如果我有机会带外国朋友游览我的家乡，我会毫不犹豫地带他去位于家乡核心地带的古镇。这座迷人的小镇，拥有青石板街道和木结构房屋，弥漫着独特的历史气息，既令人沉醉又充满教育意义。Walking through the narrow alleys, my friend would be captivated by the intricate carvings adorning the facades of the old buildings, each telling a story of our ancestors' wisdom and craftsmanship. Moreover, the town is renowned for its traditional cuisine, which my friend would undoubtedly savor. From delicate pastries to hearty stews, each dish is a testament to the rich culinary heritage of our region.漫步在狭窄的巷弄中，朋友定会被古老建筑外立面的精美雕花所吸引——每一处雕刻都诉说着先辈的智慧与匠心。更值得一提的是，这里以传统美食闻名，朋友可以在此细细品味。从精致糕点到浓郁炖菜，每道佳肴都是本地区丰富饮食文化的见证。Beyond the aesthetic and culinary delights, the ancient town also serves as a living museum of our local culture. During our visit, we could attend a local festival or folk performance, providing my friend with a firsthand experience of our traditions and customs.除了视觉与味觉的双重享受，这座古镇更是本土文化的活态博物馆。我们或许能恰逢当地节庆或民俗表演，让朋友亲身体验我们的传统习俗。In conclusion, I believe that a visit to the ancient town would offer my foreign friend a glimpse into the heart of our hometown's history, culture, and cuisine. It would undoubtedly be an unforgettable experience for him.总而言之，古镇之行将让外国友人透过历史棱镜，窥见家乡文化精髓与美食传承。这必将成为他难以忘怀的深度文化体验。 2. 请阅读下列这篇大学英语四级作文（7-9分及格档），分析哪些方面存在不足，并对其进行修改润色，使其升格为高分档。（请独立思考独立完成）题目：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of writing ability and how to develop it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.低分档作文内容：In modern society, writing ability is of great significance. It serves as a crucial means of communication. Whether it is writing business emails, reports or academic papers, good writing skills can ensure that ideas are accurately conveyed.To develop writing ability, reading extensively is essential. By reading various excellent works, we can learn different writing styles, vocabulary, and sentence structures. Besides, practice makes perfect. Regular writing exercises, such as keeping a diary or writing short essays, help us become more proficient. Seeking feedback from others, like teachers or peers, is also beneficial as they can point out our weaknesses and offer suggestions for improvement.In conclusion, writing ability is vital for both academic and career development, and it can be enhanced through continuous learning and practice.

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截止日期：2025-03-23

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[作文号:3170187] 【四级周周练】图表作文(2024-12-08)

要求：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the graph below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the graph and comment on China’s achievements in urbanization. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.【写作指导】开头描述图表内容，指出中国城市化程度从 1980 年到 2019 年的显著变化。分析中国在城市化方面的成就，如基础设施改善、公共服务提升、就业机会增加等。可适当提及城市化带来的挑战，并提出应对建议。文章结构：开头段：简要描述图表。中间段：阐述中国城市化成就。结尾段：提及挑战与展望。

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截止日期：2024-12-22

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[作文号:3143718] • How to persuade a friend to keep a healthy diet(2024-11-09)

要求：Please write an essay of problem-solution pattern on the topics with at least 150words :How to persuade a friend to keep a healthy diet； it should follow problem, the details of the problem, solution and evaluation pattern; It often starts with a problem, and then the details of the problem. It is generally followed by the ways or methods to solve the problem. It may end with a concluding sentence to tell readers the result of solution, and the evaluation toward the solution. 200words+ is GOOD.

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截止日期：2024-11-30

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[作文号:3037178] Living alone or Living with Roommates(2024-04-08)

要求：Write an essay of no less than 200 words on one of the following topic: Living alone or Living with Roommates?

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截止日期：2024-06-14

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[作文号:3032447] An essay on physical beauty(2024-04-01)

要求： The love of beauty is universal. The pursuit of beauty is everlasting, especially for women. We have found various ways to improving our physical appearances. Do these effort, however, necessary? By the end of this unit, you are expected to air your opinion on the following topic : The advantages of plastic surgery outweigh its disadvantages or The disadvantages of plastic surgery outweigh its advantages ?

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截止日期：2024-06-14

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[作文号:2985826] Section III Part B Writing(2023-12-09)

要求：Write a passage according to the following information.1.Study the following picture carefully and write an essay of about 160-200 words. 2.Your essay should meet the requirements below: 1) Describe the picture and interpret its meaning; 2) Give your comments on the phenomenon.

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[作文号:2936997] Please write a narration(2023-10-18)

要求：Write an essay of no less than 200 words on one of the following topics, Topics:1) An embarrassing experience2) The most unforgettable event 3) My biggest mistakep.s. If you are not familiar with the 3 topics mentioned above, you can write a narration with a ALL NEW topic you like. Please pay attention to the 5 key elements of a narration.

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截止日期：2023-12-30

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[作文号:2879900] A narration(2023-05-19)

要求：Write a narrative story, real or imaginary, on the following topics:(1) a conplict between you and your friends/family member;(2) the most impressive visit to a place of interest;(3) a interesting plot in a novel or movie you like;(4) an impressive story you heard or read;(5) an unforgettable experience.Choose ONLY ONE of the above topics and write a narration with at least 200 words.

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截止日期：2023-07-05

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[作文号:2860518] Please write a comparison/contrast essay.(2023-04-25)

要求：Here are three topics as follows :the difference of shopping concept between the old and the young;different attitudes toward money between the old and the young;different attitudes toward shopping between girls and boys.Please choose one of the three topics to write a comparison / contrast essay with less than 200 words.

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截止日期：2023-07-05

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