11.   This program has made dramatic leaps in ease-of-use and reliability from its original version.

12.   This is the original version, not the revision.

13.   If you are not using the original version, you should say so.

14.   You should keep details of the original version, if you can find them.

15.   The brief moral drawn at the end of the original French version of this tale is that he who trusts his wife more than himself will frequently regret it.

16.   Their constructions are then compared with the original Hemingway version.

17.   From their collected versions of the story, an idealised narrative will be developed which will then form the basis of comparison with the original Hemingway version.

18.   And, of course, all this will provide an illuminating contrast with the original Hemingway version.

19.   This would produce a sample narrative derived from the collected responses which could then be contrasted with the original version.